Forbidden Fate.....................................#1

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Forbidden Fate.....................................#1

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07

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Ohio

0 posted 1999-12-08 09:47 PM

His name came to me through a gentle summer breeze.
A voice near a whisper. A hearts silent plea.
A magical union powerless through vast space.
Twilight questions of what brought us to this place.

Overwhelming mystery makes it hard to stay away.
A time, a place and where to meet...I would choose the day.
Imprisoned by the longing, fate finally tips his hat.
Four rings you see won't stop us..it's far too late for that.

His eyes capture mine. First kiss ensued thereafter.
I drown within his soul right then...amidst the nervous laughter.
Abundant time was not ours. It ended all too soon.
Brief meetings we shall only have each night amongst the moon.

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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1 posted 1999-12-08 10:09 PM

I loved it then...I love it now. Wonderful heart you have there, Sally!

To the world you might be just one person but to one person you might just be the world.

Denise

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2 posted 1999-12-08 10:09 PM

Beautiful, Sally! So beautiful!

Denise

Nan

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3 posted 1999-12-09 07:24 AM

Yep - Great poem.... and great pic too!!

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

4 posted 1999-12-09 10:28 AM

yep will ditto Nan

and add my sighs

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 1999-12-09 01:21 PM

Sally,
I hope that wasn't the finally? Well done enjoyed.

Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

6 posted 1999-12-10 12:18 PM

Thank you all...this poem holds a lot of meaning to me.

Mike, you have a pretty wonderful heart yourself, you know.  Thank you.

Nan, I thought I should remove that pic...I look like I'm 12 years old!!!  LOL  Thank you for th compliments.

Denise and loveit, my heartfelt thanks to you both.

Sy, no this wan't the finale. That hasn't happened as of yet. Thank you for the read and reply.

Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11

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Georgia United States

7 posted 1999-12-10 01:09 PM

Sally very beautiful, and I hope the finale does not come soon.

B Gravitt

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

8 posted 1999-12-10 01:20 PM

This is a beautiful piece and one I can relate to Sally

btw....I like your pic!

A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

lostboy
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since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

9 posted 1999-12-10 03:04 PM

This is very nice work Sally. I'm sure you're right, it won't be the finale.

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