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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 1999-12-08 07:40 PM


Destination: - Nowhere

There was a purpose once for me
A way to go, a path to tread
Then stripped away so suddenly
The vision lost, the spirit dead

And now the haze has settled in
To spend the night, to spend a year
But even so the path is hid
By longing want and lonely tear

There was a purpose to my life
But now it's gone, my heart's aware
Would that my eye could see ahead
I'd tread this road to Nowhere

Elizabeth Santos

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Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-08 08:11 PM


Liz - this is the most depressing thing I have seen from you - write to me OK?

It is beautiful though.

Kamla

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
2 posted 1999-12-08 08:54 PM


Kamla, dear, it's just a poem!
Glad you liked it
Liz

Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-08 09:27 PM


Hey, Elizabeth! This is how I felt last week! Thank God the fog has finally lifted! Great poem!!  

 Denise



Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 1999-12-08 10:09 PM


Elizabeth,
Nowhere is every where.
It is so.

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