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Open Poetry #4

Two Left Feet

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

0 posted 1999-12-05 08:46 PM

Oh no, here I go again!
As I trip on my own feet.
Please bend down and pick me up
And help me to my seat.

This new dance that you do out here
Leaves me tangled and confused.
I feel like a floppy ragdoll.
And I'm sure you're all amused.

Standing in the line for shiny dancing shoes,
When they were handed out, two left ones I received.
Now as my dancing partner sees the clumsy way I dance.
When the music's finally over, I'm sure he is relieved.

So just plop me at a table
And put a drink in hand.
The dance floor is a safer place
If I just sit and toast the band.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

1 posted 1999-12-05 08:55 PM

I agree, I agree, I agree - utterly!

- very cute.

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-12-05 09:11 PM

You just need the right dancin' shoes - is all....

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-12-05 09:20 PM

...hehehehe...did you see me at my daughter's wedding, Friday night?! Oh well, at least I tried! Great poem!

Denise

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

4 posted 1999-12-05 11:02 PM

Perhaps Denise was given two right ones since I have the two left ones!

Congrats on your daughters wedding Denise

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

5 posted 1999-12-05 11:28 PM

Thanks Eloise! Yes, perhaps I have the two right feet! hehehehehe

Denise

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