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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-12-02 11:27 AM


You're evry minute,
Every hour,every second,
I breathe for you,
You're every soul that never part,
You're my life, you're my heart,
My soul,every minute think of our sweet love that lasts,
And all that was in the past,
And gone and was done,
by every minute of your love that counts

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 12-02-1999).]

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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-12-02 03:02 PM


Oh gees, I hate it when I get this wrapped up in someone!! ARGH! I hate it when my every breath is for them! It's a very vulnerable place to be!!! I can certainly relate to the passion that went into this as you wrote! Very nice!

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Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 847
Ohio
2 posted 1999-12-02 03:08 PM


Ah yes, sweet love! Very nice, indeed.
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