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Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin

0 posted 1999-11-30 03:01 PM


Go away
Leave me to my pain
Dealing with it
Is making me insane

You are gone
I am still here
Clinging to those last words
You whispered in my ear

Ciao Te Amo



© Copyright 1999 Cheryl Beth - All Rights Reserved
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
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Texas
1 posted 1999-11-30 08:57 PM


Nicely done, very sad.


((((((HUGS)))))

AgTech
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since 1999-11-30
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Kaukauna, Wi, USA
2 posted 1999-11-30 10:34 PM


nice, but confusing
Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
Georgia United States
3 posted 1999-11-30 10:49 PM


I like this. I know where this is. I have been there.
Denise
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4 posted 1999-11-30 10:56 PM


Must be a sad place to be.

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Denise


Nan
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5 posted 1999-12-01 07:26 AM


Storms do blow over - and the sun shines again...
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
6 posted 1999-12-01 07:56 AM


Dolphins3
Italiano? ou portugues?
Nao importa, gostei muito!
I like it
Elizabeth

Dolphins3
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since 1999-09-30
Posts 135
Wisconsin
7 posted 1999-12-01 11:17 AM


Ohme, Thank you for your kind words. *Hugs*

AgTech, Sorry you found it confusing.

Betty, Thank you for understanding where this came from.

Denise, Yeah it can be a sad place but like Nan says it blows over.

Nan, There is always tommarrow right. Thanks for the sweet words. *Hugs*

Elizabeth, I'm glad you like it.

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