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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 1999-11-30 12:16 PM


Have you ever noticed time’s kind veil-
Softens hindsight’s view.
Like grass does cover a new grave
And hide cold Death from you?
And so it is with failed romance-
And hearts which cry for ease....
Given time the wounds will close
And make one seek release..
From loneliness and boredom...
From harsh reality-
And seek a soul mate once again
Mis’ry loves company.
Alas, while time may heal the pain
I fear it only serves-
To mold more firmly what we are
And strengthen our reserves.
As water seeks it’s level
We likewise seek our own...
And always try to find new loves
Like old ones we have known.
Ah, foolish people, aren’t we all?
To think that we can learn,
And make aright inherent wrongs.
At each and every turn?
Ah, lovelorn one, wilt thou but hear?
And then be truly free?
Then set your sights on different goals-
or disappointed be.

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Live large, people!
~GS~ http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/HomePage.html




[This message has been edited by Gunslinger (edited 11-30-1999).]

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RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
1 posted 1999-11-30 12:27 PM


Truly insightful. Very nice poem GS!
suthern
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
2 posted 1999-11-30 12:32 PM


I love the lines "And seek a soul mate once again Mis’ry loves company." *G* Well done!
Martie
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since 1999-09-21
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California
3 posted 1999-11-30 12:39 PM


I love your cowboy poetry and the scenes you paint, but even more I love your poems that come from life's lessons, hard learned. Well done Gunslinger!
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