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broker6
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since 1999-11-07
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Bellevue, NE, Sarpy

0 posted 1999-11-11 09:38 AM


Lay Thee Down
by ©Richard Budig 1997

Come, lay thee down.
Be my gentle lover.
Let me live forever
In your mingles
Of raven black hair.
Let me touch
Your milky skin
So soft and so fair.
Let us join together
Upon this celestial sea.
Come, lay thee down,
Lay thee down beside me.


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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
1 posted 1999-11-11 12:28 PM


Beautifully written and packed full of vivid imagery

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)

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