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Jer
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since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA

0 posted 2000-01-05 07:52 PM


Randomly I write,
Bound in boundless chains.
Lost maybe,
But I see where I'm going in life.
Not all can see.
Vision is not my strength,
Surely it is your strength?
I am not making sence,
but I am not confused.
I write to let these words form.
If they were not formed,
What will they do?
Will they restrain
My random babblings?
I think not.

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Leigh
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since 1999-12-29
Posts 20

1 posted 2000-01-06 08:25 PM


I really like that! It was absolutely right. Keep writing!



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