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How do you breathe again??
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How do you breathe again?? |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
When the world stops and the pain begins how do you tell yourself to go on and breath again? When he said i love you and never ment it How do you live on to never regret it? The answer my friend, to these undying questions Is that there is no answer merely just suggestions To live and forget, smile and pretend but these are no good because these will bring no end... "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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eagle Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39singapore |
nice thought provoking poem there  keep it goin!  |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
thanks eagle, i'll try! "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
Oh my god, you don't know how I felt this poem. My solution is to just never feel. Even if they say they love you. --A Little Fairy-- |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Fairy...yes i wish i didnt feel but i do...even when he says he loves me...am i really that pathetic?? "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
great job on the poem and keep your head up... "time is the hardest thing to bear.. and we will always complain things arent fair.. memories are everlasting.. even tho the fragile ones will sting"... and its human nature to be vulnerable to the things we need the most... particularly love... Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks star, yes when looking for love everyone is vulnerable...thanks for replying... Starboards  "I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget" |
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The Mike Sacks Member
since 1999-08-29
Posts 129brooklyn ny |
this imy fav poem by anither writer of all time |
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Olga Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 152Brooklyn, NY, USA |
I really liked this poem. I can relate easily. My ex told me he loves me, but i dont beleive him. The thing that hurt most is that he doesn't mean it. So now all i did was give it time and try to forget. I hope things work out 4 u. Keep it up. --------------------------------------------- <<What you resist you become.>> |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Olga...i'm sorry about what your x said about you...i'm sure he does mean it...deep down...yeah me and my x are back together...but i was where you are just days ago...i hope everything works out for you too! Starboards (Ashley) "When a love affair ends it may take a while to see what's grown in it's stead, but usually it is you!" |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Powerful, heartfelt work. Do keep it up!  *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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starboards Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467longwood, florida |
Thanks alwye...i promise i will... |
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