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Mario21
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since 1999-12-17
Posts 11


0 posted 1999-12-21 01:49 PM




Questions or Truth
The end of one day yet the beginning of another
Losing one love but finding one more lover
Coming to the end or is it really the start
Walking in the light or is it the dark
Going to the right or is it the left
Going upstairs or is it coming down the steps
These are perceptions we have of the world
Is a diamond a diamond or to you is it a pearl
Does gold have a shine or is it a silvery glow
Does a river run wild or does it have a calm flow
Are you headed in a direction or spinning round and round
Is your life full of noises or does it not make a sound
Are you flying high above or diggin down below
Do you have an idea where you’re going or you just don’t know
Are you on top of the world or do you feel like nothin
Do you have real friends or are you surround by people who be frontin
These are questions that I ask myself
Do I have real value or do I just sit on the shelf
Left there because no one really likes
No longer can I be called the Moon Lit Knight
I’ve lost my cool nature had, had a drop in style
My essence of life has been reduced to that of a child
Nothing but a screw up nothing but a fool
Now how would you feel if that were to be you.

By:Mario “Da Kid” 21

 Let it be done!

© Copyright 1999 Mario - All Rights Reserved
starboards
Member
since 1999-10-14
Posts 467
longwood, florida
1 posted 1999-12-21 04:03 PM


This one makes me think...great exercise! keep on writing!



 
"I wont look back, I wont regret, though it hurts like hell someday I will forget"

destiny502
Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 57
OH
2 posted 1999-12-21 09:00 PM


you are an amazing writer..i love your poetry!  i look forward to reading it..if thats strange..  
eagle
Junior Member
since 1999-10-20
Posts 39
singapore
3 posted 1999-12-22 12:41 PM


That was Great!  

It makes you stop and think about your life. Can't wait to see more of your poems  

Fairy Colours
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169
Sunrise,Fl,US
4 posted 1999-12-22 11:26 AM


This was good.

 --A Little Fairy--

Jinx
New Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 7
Wilkes-Barre PA
5 posted 1999-12-22 09:28 PM


Excellent, I believe that in the lines you expressed a truth, the world is only as good or bad as you see it.
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