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Teen Poetry #2

O, distant life...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-12-15 11:02 PM

O, distant life, demanding more attention,
Abandon me, so I may see my dear.
And take with thee the ever granted tension
And make the irksome troubles disappear.
God, cleanse my mind of thoughts it often sees
And let it rest, in the embrace of void.
Erase the letters, numbers and degrees--
The company by which I am employed.
Instead, allow me to imagine that I’m warm
And undisturbed by fierce and brute December
And let the vacuum of my mind take on her form,
With which informed, my mind shall remember.
Into the vacant thought, when thought does part,
I’ll pour her spirit from the abyss of my heart

Marilyn
Member Elite

since 1999-09-26

Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 1999-12-15 11:59 PM

Wow...all I can really say is....Are you sure you are just a teenager?

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

2 posted 1999-12-16 12:51 PM

he didnt get his name out of the abyss?
or did he =)

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

3 posted 1999-12-16 06:32 AM

Yes Marilyn, I am just 16.

And Kevin, I think you should read it again...

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