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Teen Poetry #2

Perfect is you

Kevin

Senior Member

since 1999-11-02

Posts 729
Torrington, Ct, Usa

0 posted 1999-12-12 12:30 PM

Nobody’s perfect,
a fact we must face.
We've all had those times,
we wished to replace.
And too many lies,
I've had to go through,
to finally realize,
That perfect is you.

I’ve seen many days,
Watched them pass me by.
Been lost in the haze,
Till you caught my eye.
Drowning in wrong,
with one glance I knew,
after searching so long
that perfect is you.

disappointment expected,
a daily emotion.
Attraction neglected,
a useless commotion.
A life that was gray,
saw flashes of hue,
ever since the day,
that perfect was you.

eagle
Junior Member

since 1999-10-20

Posts 39
singapore

1 posted 1999-12-12 03:16 AM

A wonderful poem! =)
The rhyming's perfect! cool

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

2 posted 1999-12-12 10:16 PM

Quite exellent work, Kevin! Man, I'd melt if someone wrote something like this for me. Actually, someone does..but anyway, this is wonderful work! You have such talent, do keep it up!

*Krista Knutson*

"I can feel you breathe, it's washing over me, and suddenly I'm melting into you..." ~Faith Hill: Breathe~

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 1999-12-13 04:14 PM

Your poem is very touching. I really liked it. For once in my life, I'm at a loss for words. Please read my poem, Texas Land. I wrote it for my great-grandpa who passed away this week. you're very talented.

Live a life of happiness!!!

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