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Teen Poetry #2

This Life

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

0 posted 1999-11-23 11:32 PM

This life is nothing anymore,
I think as i fall on the floor.
The tears start streaming,
and I get mad,
that im crying over you again,
I'm so sad.
My sobs are uncontrollable,
as I think of this life.
It's so pathetic and worthless,
I start reaching for the knife.
Can't do it this time,
no one would understand.
Every thinks my life is great.
Could my death be by my own hand?
This life is closer to death now,
as I lay here on the floor.
Contemplating whether to go on,
I am just not sure.
No will to live,
for you break me down,
these tears wont stop,
I'm about to drown.

Blue Eyed Wanderer
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 84
Rhode Island, US

1 posted 1999-11-24 04:35 PM

Whoa...big time flashback. I know exactly what you mean, and know the feeling too well. If you want to talk to someone, feel free to email me anytime. I'll always listen

Great poem.

~Jess~

chollagrl4
Member

since 1999-08-10

Posts 65
brick

2 posted 1999-11-24 07:22 PM

Thanx I appreciate it

destiny502
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 57
OH

3 posted 1999-11-24 09:57 PM

great poem. its exactly how i feel when stuff happens in my life. everyday its something different. thanks! if you ever need to talk, just send me an e-mail. id be glad to listen!

Heather

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