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foxy_16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA

0 posted 1999-11-23 07:39 PM


I want to tell you
What you mean to me
How my every thought
Revolves around you
How when I look into your eyes
I feel faint
Because I see my life in you
I want to tell you
How perfect you are
That you are so beautiful
The way you move
Your expressive smile
How you know exactly what to say
to make ME feel beautiful
I want to tell you
How I want you
How I yearn for you
The way you tease me
The way you tease my body
How you touch me
I want to tell you
How I can't
Because even though my mind speaks
My voice won't work
Maybe it's that I'm shy
Maybe it's that I'm scared
Maybe it's that I'm unsure
But I just want you to know....


[This message has been edited by foxy_16 (edited 11-23-1999).]

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comedownking
New Member
since 1999-11-17
Posts 6
U.K
1 posted 1999-11-25 06:02 PM


i can really relate to this. i dont know about you but i know i never did the right thing and said those important words. i dont think i'll ever stop wondering what would've happened if i had. great poem!
melissaramsour
Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 16
Aurora, NE
2 posted 1999-11-25 10:50 PM


This poem is very nice, I like how it flows. And I've been in a similar situation-too shy to say what's really on your mind. But wanting to so bad. I really like this poem! Well done!
Krut
Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 27
Adams, Wi U.S.A
3 posted 1999-11-26 03:11 PM


that was cool i can really relate...im in that position now...its freaky....ure poem kinda helped me realize that...but im still to afraid...
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