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Peter Hang New Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 7Alma MI, USA |
Whatever did happen to us How could you ever leave me in the dust I was willing to give you my love and trust Because no matter what I must Fail no more in your love Hoping that I could rise above My heart of blood leaves a long trail The new wind will never find my sail I will never move on Until the day we are both gone This is a very long time Is fully loving me such a crime What is so wrong Must i sing the sad song In the midst of your love That you say should not be mine I sit and I cry To know that i try And give it my all For the only thing i'll ever need Hoping that I'll succeed knowing that I should fail I'll never give up I will always pursue Hoping that you will always know That there will be no end, so I will always love you |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This poem is very sweet, it tugs at the heartstrings.... ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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April Resi Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 119Alabama |
That's very sweet! That's what love does to you tho, huh?! Willing to do anything... very nice poem, I like it! April ------------------ ...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant, And there it goes, I think I found my best friend... |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
This is a beautiful poem. I can relate to the doing anything for love, anything that does not violate my personal believes. There is a time when you have to let go for your own welfare, even if you do not want to, when love is not returned. |
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