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thoughts surreal |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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Just how long has it been? my friend I wish that I could say my mind has wandered off again distant from the light of day insecure with my surroundings lost among familiar scenes a place insanity lies bounding distant from the world serene no order to the way I feel books are scattered on the shelf emotions wrapped up in surreal worthy of Dali himself bend over to pick up the pieces love and life fall to your knees time once again ceases a mind never again at ease. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
wonderful picture you paint very descriptive good job keep it up ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I liked that poem. It's very good. You are very talented. Nothing I have written is very good,but you can check it out if you want to. |
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Tina TT Junior Member
since 1999-11-01
Posts 45Victoria, Australia |
ahh...great imagery..brings the idea very well without getting into psychobabble mode  ------------------ ~What if you slept? What if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower? And what if, when you awoke, you had that flower in your hand? Aye, what then?~ |
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