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Brom
Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 16


0 posted 2000-06-06 04:42 AM


I kepp finding poems that i've been waiting to put somewhere  
Love Unfulfilled

Sadness fills my lonely heart
Whenever I think of you.
My love, it goes out unreturned,
And I'm left feeling blue.
How I wish that I did love
Someone who could love me,
But to eternal happiness
Your love don't hold the key.
So I'll wait for tomorrow,
When I'll be over you,
And I will hold my true love's hand
And she will love me too.




 Love will be the end of us...

© Copyright 2000 Adam Portman - All Rights Reserved
amazon_lover
Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491
Dublin,Ireland
1 posted 2000-06-06 06:49 PM


Hi Brom
I feel exactly the same way but to get over is something out of my reach. I can't control it otherwise I wouldn't spend long hours in passions. I'll be holding some one else.

Sincerely
A_L

Brom
Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 16

2 posted 2000-06-06 06:54 PM


Well, as it turned out, the one who poem talks about came to me after she read it and we talked..then got back together. we've been together for a year and a half now :>

 Love will be the end of us...

StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
3 posted 2000-06-06 07:31 PM


Funny, I feel the same way right now! I wish I could find my true love and hold their hand instead of holding on to the maleshift love I have with my on and off again boyfriend. I'm glad to hear thinhs worked out for the better gor you!! Keep it up it was very personal and beautiful. Love Always~*~Jessica~*~
StarPryncess17
Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932
Colorado
4 posted 2000-06-06 07:33 PM


SORRY! I MEANT "MAKESHIFT LOVE". SORRY ABOUT MY TYPING SKILLS!! =0) ~*~JeSs~*~
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