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LIL' Lou Junior Member
since 2000-06-02
Posts 29OKlahoma |
I Sat there thinking of you thinking of how for 7 years i have liked you i always wondered , do you like me too!?! You caught me when i fell Your face had looked so pale When you kissed me oh how red i got ever since then i have liked you alot! But now friends we are Oh we have come so far Do you like me i like you i guess i will have to wait and see. Love is like a rainbow, Each color has a differnt meaning. Lauren Lou |
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LIL' Lou Junior Member
since 2000-06-02
Posts 29OKlahoma |
Hey GUys I want you to know the 2nd to the last line should be I LIke you , do you like me? I put it backwards!!! This is a true poem tell me what you think! Love is like a rainbow, Each color has a differnt meaning. Lauren Lou |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
pretty well written, i like it, it has kinda a leading questioning air about it, like your yearning to hear what he has to say as long as its yes, but i suppose im pointing out the obvious anyway, i think it was really good  always follow your heart, never follow others unless it is truely where you want to go, and never give up a dream, maybe just set it aside...:) |
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LIL' Lou Junior Member
since 2000-06-02
Posts 29OKlahoma |
thanx Clb I really like hearing what you think PLease read some of my other poems sometime! LOU  Love is like a rainbow, Each color has a differnt meaning. Lauren Lou |
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