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Hope |
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Amy J. Renz Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 26Newark, NJ, USA |
I look at you and hope Hope for more than meets the eye Eye the dream, elusive and sigh Sigh for what could be, but won't Won't ever be, but for the past Past experiences that still haunt Haunt me, my thoughts, my dreams Dreams that are made to be broken Broken fragments of hope Hope is all that I can do. |
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Star Fairy 2 Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260cerritos, california, usa |
very moving good job i like the style too ------------------ Don't Fall.. Rise in Love -------823------- |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
This is nice...i have one suggestion....make it so that the last word of the poem is the same as the first word. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
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