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Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

0 posted 1999-11-08 10:10 PM


tonights my birthday
and all that I wish.
Is that you'd show up,
and we'd share a kiss.
hold me in your arms
take all my fears away.

he hurt me
made me cry all night.
but you've helped me smile
your my new light.
not sure if you know
but I like you so much.

this feels so diffrent
I've never felt this before.
like you make me so happy
who could wish for more?

every minute we're together
a smile dances on my lips.
kindness flows all through you
right to me through your finger tips.

I'm afraid of rejection,
how can I let you know.
My feelings are so unexpected
what happens if they show?

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~




[This message has been edited by Maitay (edited 11-08-1999).]

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Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-11-09 08:14 PM


A wistful wish, nicely expressed

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Star Fairy 2
Member
since 1999-09-06
Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa
2 posted 1999-11-09 09:48 PM


very nice
lotz of emotion
i like it

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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