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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
ALONE There was a time when I was innocent There was a time when you really did care I never questioned your love, I wouldn’t dare The pain in my eyes you couldn’t see, I thought it was ok, you didn’t know what you were doing to me You didn’t know the pain I had to bare I sat by myself, with a feeling all too rare There was no one to tell me it would all be fine And there was no one to listen and just be kind I was alone and no one could fill the empty space; The space inside that once held a love so strong, Now just faded like an old, played out song. You told me you loved me, you told me that you cared. And now I see that you only lied, and here I sit, alone and scared. |
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Secsyy lil angel Junior Member
since 2000-05-30
Posts 36Portland Oregon, USA |
WOW! Great poem!!! I know exactly how you feel. If you were writing this poem from experience, im sorry that you have been hurt and i hope things get better for you! ~*~*Kia*~*~ ~*Love exists only in the hearts of those who choose to acknowledge its existence...*~ *~To the world you may be one person, but to one person you may be the world.~* |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
well I was thinking about this poem. I wrote this poem about my dad. we have had some major problems and I want him to know that he is stil in my heart after everything that has hppened. Dad, if you read this, I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU. please call me. |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
hEY, thanx for your reply to Together: alone. Your words are very kind. The poem of your's I just read is great. I know that the theme would not suggest a reaction such as that, but quality of your message direction and metaphores is wonderful!!! Make sure you read Powerless before it's off the board. later. Jeremy H. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's always hard to stand alone, but God never gives you anything you can't handle. Just be strong, and you'll be fine. PS- Welcome to Passions! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
Thank all of you for your wonderful replies! It means a lot to hear someone else's opinion on my writing! Thanks!!! =0) Love ~*~Jessica~*~ |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi SP We realize there are many good things in life other than longing forever,only when we are alone. Sincerely A_L |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
A_L. you're right.But this person is my dad. I can't just give up on him. No matter what he'll always be my dad and I'll always be here even though he betrayed me. I do long to have a relationship with him still, but I can't give into the perils of his girlfriend and I refuse to sacrifice my happiness for someone who doesn't deserve it. Thanks for your replies! Love Always ~*~Jessica Lynn~*~ |
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