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brendon2k
Junior Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 38
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0 posted 2000-05-27 09:21 PM

inside i might still think of you,
ever since the day you left,
all i hope is you make it through,
cause all i wish for is the best,

all of what i felt for you,
ever since the day we met,
and all i've tried to keep from you,
still seems so hard to forget,

all i was ineed of was a reason,
a reason for telling you how,
how you meant more then the world to me,
but i guess it's best you never found out,

to this day i think of you,
and i wish that i could show,
all of what i feel for you,
but would you even want to know,

now this act of hate i play,
and i've played it since the day you left,
i've learnt to play this to my best,
and now it's becoming much to hard for me to hide,
for all this time that i've kept this inside,
that the one thing i need is you

Lucius Cade
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 235
Saskatchewan

1 posted 2000-05-28 02:26 AM

"how you meant more then the world to me,
but i guess it's best you never found out,

and i wish that i could show,
all of what i feel for you,
but would you even want to know,"

I know what you mean, because the break up would have hurt more if she knew how much you cared for her, I loved this peice, for sure the best of yours I have read.

Lucidity is the answer to all problems

Deranger
Member

since 2000-05-10

Posts 498
Somewhere, between here and there

2 posted 2000-05-29 05:29 AM

Whoa, long time no see dude...

Falling in love is so hard on the knees...(there is some truth to that Aerosmith song afterall...). Women, what can ya do? One minute your on cloud 9, the next your falling slowly but surely to the ground. Well anywho, great poem, now is this one suppose to be set to music as well?

DERANGER

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Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2000-05-30 08:17 AM

Nice poem. I liked it. I don't believe I've read anything else you've written, but I'd like to. Any how, your poem is nice. a bit to familar though.(sometimes i wish guys would just take a hint and get rid of my most FAVEORITE dumping line..."let's just be friends")Any how, no need to dump my troubles on you. Maybe you could read oone of my poems sometime. bye.

Secsyy lil angel
Junior Member

since 2000-05-30

Posts 36
Portland Oregon, USA

4 posted 2000-05-31 01:30 AM

That was a wonderful poem!! You know....i wish my x-boyfriend would say those words to me. Im sorry that you got hurt, and i hope things get better. If you like, go check out my poem *Waiting for you* (that one was to my x) Anyways....I better go now.

Best Wishes ~
~*~*Kia*~*~

emma
New Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 8

5 posted 2000-05-31 12:00 PM

Hey i am really sorry about her but what i say to guys is if they dont want me forget them!hahaha! but sometimes its harder than that! i know what you mean! i have been hurt alot! well check out my "do we really know" poem. its all about what love is! good luck with her!
~*Emma*~

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