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Ladybug16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 15
Nacogdoches, TX 75964

0 posted 1999-11-08 05:15 PM


Love is Patient, Love is Kind
Love knows no Wrong, True love is Blind

Love makes me Laugh, Love makes me Cry
Love makes me Daft, Love makes me Sigh

Love is the Sun in the Rain
Love is the greatest cause of my Pain

Love is my Hope, my reason to live
Love is my Joy, what makes me Give

Love makes me do things I never would do
Love is the look I get from You

Love is standing in the Gap
Love is the little child in my lap

Love is You, Love is Me
Love is what makes us a Family

Love us what you see after a Kiss
Love is my Smile, Love is true Bliss

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Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
1 posted 1999-11-08 07:10 PM


So true!
Systematic Decay
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
2 posted 1999-11-08 07:47 PM


How true.....very nice poem too.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



kari
Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104
Hyde Park, Ut, USA
3 posted 1999-11-09 06:06 PM


I liked this a lot. All the of statements are well thought out and it is all together very sweet. Good job!
April Resi
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since 1999-10-18
Posts 119
Alabama
4 posted 1999-11-10 07:06 PM


I love this one!! I don't know exactly why, but it just hit me. I love the way you worded it and the general sweetness of it! ::grins:: Very nice poem.

April

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...in your eyes, I see my future in an instant,
And there it goes, I think I found my best friend...

Ladybug16
Junior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 15
Nacogdoches, TX 75964
5 posted 1999-11-11 12:37 PM


Thank you for your compliments.

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1 Timothy 4:12

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