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luv2luvu
New Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 7
wayne, mi, usa

0 posted 1999-11-07 09:34 PM


the first time i saw you,
it was love at first sight.
the first time i saw you,
i knew you were mr. right.

the first time we got together,
i hoped we'd never part.
i thought we'd be forever,
then you went and broke my heart.

i was so hurt,
but wanted you back.
so i tried to flirt,
to get our love back on track.

now we are together,
forever we will be true.
i hope we last forever,
'cause i cant deal losing you.

© Copyright 1999 luv2luvu - All Rights Reserved
Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
1 posted 1999-11-07 09:53 PM


I'm glad you got back together. I hope your relationship doesn't fall apart. If it does, maybe he isn't Mr. Right.
LinaInverse
Junior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 18

2 posted 1999-11-08 12:45 PM


I hope you two dont break up ...
Breaking up is a hard step to deal with ..
So... cya laterz!
---Lina and <((| |^)>---
(ZEL)

Lilli
Junior Member
since 1999-11-06
Posts 21
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 1999-11-08 02:42 AM


Hope he is Mr. Right, and I hope mine is Mr. Right too! I just took my boy back...and I hope I can trust him this time!!!
luv2luvu
New Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 7
wayne, mi, usa
4 posted 1999-11-08 04:42 PM


thank you all for your concern. and i hope that your boyfriends stay by your side, and you stay right by theirs!!!

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