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son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125


0 posted 2000-05-01 11:55 PM


how i long for the taste
of her sweet savour
and yearn for the pleasure
of her unmatched flavor

how i desire her warmth
in a lonely nights cold
and the heat of her passion
so tender yet bold

her melodious lovesong
that graces my ear
endows beautiful peace
to my most ravenous fear

my broken heart
she does generously bless
with the soothing tranquility
of her gentle caress

the wonderful magic
she shares in a kiss
is my gateway to paradise
indescribable bliss

even though we are seperated
oh so many miles
i can still close my eyes
and envision her smile

bound by love
though so far apart
she's here where she'll stay
in the depths of my heart


 

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Barelybreathing
Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 46

1 posted 2000-05-02 12:07 PM


you are totally in love! Beautiful work.
Thanks for sharing.

~sami~


 'The greatest thing in the world is to know how to be one's own.'
~Montaigne~


Oo0ostephanio0oO
Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 194
Massachusetts ~USA~
2 posted 2000-05-02 04:37 AM


Very Nice Work...keep it up!  

 (:***Stephani***:)
"A true friend will always stay a friend
whether or not you feel as though the friendship or relationship is about to end."


lost soul
Junior Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 20

3 posted 2000-05-02 09:32 PM


YOU HAVE TOUCHED MY HEART ONCE AGAIN
THE GIRL YOU TALK ABOUT IS LUCKY TO HAVE YOUR LOVE AND APPRECIATION
MILES CANNOT STOP THE TRUEST OF LOVES
I WISH I WAS THERE TO GIVE YOU A HUG
EMAIL ME WHEN EVER YOU WANT
ID BE GLAD TO HERE FROM YOU
PEACE MY SWEET
YOU ARE A TRUE ROMEO
TOO BAD I COULDNT BE YOUR JULIET
EXCELLENT WORK!
HUGZ AND MANY KISSES
SWEET DREAMS AND GOODNIGHT!


 

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