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DeEpMeLaNcHoLy New Member
since 2000-04-29
Posts 9 |
He's the one Who tells you he cares Who makes up theose lies And says he'll be there Deep in your heart You know its not true But just like a drug It manipulates you I cry of pain I cry with sorrow But in my head i think there might not be a tomorrow And he sleeps soundly With no doubts or fear He'll be happy when you're gone And shed a happy tear I'm sorry for being the one To stick by your side You're no longer apart of me All because you lied |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Oh the bitter pill of betrayal....lieing can destroy much. This is a beautiful little poem full of emotion. Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Deeply painful words....lies can destroy even the best relationship. Wonderful work, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
This is a very sad and painful poem, lies can really hurt someone. People who lie to you arn't worth having in your life becuase they'll just bring you down in life. If a person makes you feel bad about yourself then they are the scum of the earth and if this person has done this to you then forget about them because your just too good for them. Men come and go but your true friends will always be there for you no matter what. Alos true love requires patience, love is something that I think that shouldn't be played with. Those are my few words of wisdom to you to help you through this, I know it will be difficult but you must forget this guy and move on with your life. And never stop smiling becuase people will love you more when you smile. keep writing!!! smile dear Poe  |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
great poem, you really laid it out there clearly.i know the pain of which you write. oh regret is not easily forgotten. |
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curlyboo New Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 4keokuk, Iowa, USA |
<img src="http://netpoets.net/img/a08.gif"> this poem is so good. it totally just comes out and tells it how it is. i love the ending. i know how much it hurts when a guy that you love lies to you, because it has happened to me.. and the pain never really goes away. but gotta be strong and keep your head up. if he lied to you, its his loss and he doesnt know what hes missing out on. ~*curlyboo*~ |
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