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Teen Poetry #2

Growing up

Rashka Fyre Blackheart
New Member

since 1999-10-17

Posts 7

0 posted 1999-11-05 12:38 PM

They ask us what we think of life,
and if we can handle the pressure,
they ask us and say they care,
but we all know what's really there.
They don't care about our future,
only society's cruel games,
they don't care about our lives,
just the beast of men out there.
Pay checks and bills to pay,
their pains will soon be ours,
they never really cared so learn,
enjoy your final hour.
This is our last freedom,
until the work bell rings,
we will become what they are,
as soon as we spread our wings.

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Tomorrow is a new day,
Tonight is never ending,
Love it to its fullest,
And Passion is forever.

Shasta
Junior Member

since 1999-10-16

Posts 24
st augustine florida

1 posted 1999-11-06 05:51 PM

I really like the way you worded it,
very nice

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You Live, You Love. You Die, what have you given

Laura Mitchell
Member

since 1999-11-05

Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238

2 posted 1999-11-07 02:15 PM

nice job, and well written!

Rashka Fyre Blackheart
New Member

since 1999-10-17

Posts 7

3 posted 1999-11-07 03:01 PM

Thank you for your words, I enjoy all opinions, good and bad. (The good ones are nicer sometimes though.)

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The lunatic, the lover, and the poet. Are of imagination all compact..

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