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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 1999-11-03 02:58 PM


Can anyone see my life line?
Is it clear and painted out?
Or does the it seem hazy and dim?

Can anyone see my life line?
Does anyone know what will be?
Can the answers go unanswered
Forever and ever 'till life heeds?

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Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
1 posted 1999-11-03 09:18 PM


JOY, some interesting questions you bring up.

I believe in fate, however, I don't know that there is any one entity or person who knows what our life will become....

I also believe that we will find out in the end.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 1999-11-03 09:54 PM


I agree with systematic decay, you have raised some good questions. You have to understand though, we have free choice. there are many roads that we may travel in our life. which one you choose is up to you. Choose Wisely.
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