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Maitay
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since 1999-07-16
Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

0 posted 1999-11-03 11:33 AM


~Just a poem about a current situation that I'm in~

As my freind you are sopposed to trust me,
know that I would never try to hurt you.
We all make mistakes,
mine just seem to outnumber that of others.
You think that everything I do is to hurt you but dont you see that I am your friend.
We cant all like everything that others do,
I just want you to stop being to hard on me.
Cant you see that I never mean to hurt people
I don't do anything right. How is this??
I cant help caring about the people that I do
and the fact that he has made me so happy.
He don't know it but just himself makes me
just becuase he is who he is.
I never would have asked for this feeling,
cuase I know how you feel about him.
Why cant I just please everyone,
I swear that I dont mean to anger you.
I've given up on trying to please everyone,
becuase everyone over reacts about stuff.
Letting such petty things destroy a bond
one that was made by being true freinds.
Recintly I have lost so many "dear" friends
people who didn't give me a chance.
To each person I have soemthing they like,
but way to often they notice the bad more.
If you dont like me or the things I do,
why be my freind???
If all I do is to make you angry and sad,
then tell me I'm not your freind.
Let it all go
just becuase you used to like him.
And you cant deal with my caring for him,
not just a crush, but a feeling.
Who cares if it dont go anywhere.
Just the fact of how happy I am,
thats worth more then enough.

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~



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Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 1999-11-03 12:23 PM


The advice I would give you is this. If a person can not accept you for who you are COMPLETELY. Then they are not and never were a true friend. Real friends are few and far between, choose carefully. Know that there are people that will put you down, for that is the only way they know how to build themselves up. Be strong in who you are and be true to yourself.
Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-11-03 09:00 PM



Maitay...I can somewhat relate. And let me express the word somewhat. My once best friend is now datig my ex-boyfriend whom I was very much in love with. Well, I still love him so much even though they are in love. I guess your poem would kinda be the way she feels, kinda. But I am the one always doing things wrong. It's a hard situation when you basically have to choose between a friend and some one you love. Always try to keep both, but remember, "Guys are a dime a dozen, but friends are one in a million."

Systematic Decay
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since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........
3 posted 1999-11-03 09:24 PM


Why cant I just please everyone

Maitay, it is an impossible task and would be plain foolish to try.

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.



Laura Mitchell
Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 76
Cincinnati OH,45238
4 posted 1999-11-05 06:26 PM


It's hard to chose friends, but I think you're doing just fine!
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