»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #2
»
to a friend in need
| Teen Poetry #2 |
|
to a friend in need |
|
|
poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
To a friend in need..... Many things in life are difficult and so many people can't handle it so many people take their lives or look to other things in need of comfort people drink to ease their pain but all they are doing is cheating reality people eat to fill up the emptyness inside them but all they are doing is changing their physical state what is this thing called emotion? all it ever does to us is ruin our lives but if we didn't have emotions we would all just be un-caring people without a purpose in life emotions shape our lives in so many ways if I didn't have emotions I wouldn't be writing any of this and you wouldn't be feeling the way you are now but try to understand that so many people love you and if I didn't care for you I wouldn't have given this to you this is a poem I've written only to make someone feel special and I choose you because I've felt you are special enough to have it at this point as I write I don't know who will read this but always remember you are beautiful inside and out and I don't want to see you cry I want to see your smile the smile that makes me smile you are a person who is very special to me now no more tears and no more sorrow and bring on the smiles cause when your done reading this I'm going to give you a big hug! -This is a poem I have written to give to friends whenever they need to know that there are people out there that care for them. If you want to send this poem yourself just let me know and give me crdit for it. </font> [This message has been edited by poe_32 (edited 04-10-2000).] |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is a nice thing to do for a friend, that is let them know that they are treasured and liked by many. I must say though, putting "PLEASE REPLY" on the topic line almost made me pass it. But I decided to read it and I am glad that I did. By putting things like that on the top of your topic, you are taking away some of the credit for your work. Many people pass by pieces of work with things like this on the top. As many of us already know, you can't have every single one of your pieces replied to with vast numbers.But I believe that your work is good and therefore doesn't require to have PLEASE REPLY on the top.  So please don't feel the need to put PLEASE REPLY at the topic line as it is not needed. Apart from that, this was a good poem that demonstrates what kinds of awful things live in our society. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
||
|
poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
Actually it wasn't intensial to have please reply in bold, I didn't realize I had caps on when I wrote that until I had already submitted it. So if anyone doesn't like it well I'm sorry but people make mistakes, and don't pass it by because I just wanted to hear from you all because in some cases no one replys to some of my poems and I really wanted to hear your opinions. Anyways, thank you for your reply. Poe  |
||
|
anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
You must remember Poe, that even if people don't reply, it does not mean that no one reads your work. Your pieces are being acknowledged but the important thing is to remember is that replies don't make you a better writer. It is what is with held within these messages that attribute to your success as a writer. ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
||
|
poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
I know that everyones replys don't make a difference in how I write, I just like to hear everyones imput on my writing and it just makes me feel better to know that people liked my poems and that they could relate to it thats all. But I know that people read it, I just like to hear from everyone thats all. But thank you for your imput I do understand what your saying and I appreciate you taking the time write back. Thanks!!!! Poe |
||
|
anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
No prob Poe.  ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
||
|
ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely poem....I am sure that anybody going thru a tough time would be glad to recieve it...I know I would!! Keep posting and I'll keep replying!! I think your poetry is really good and I enjoy reading it Love and hugs, Lizzie |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
