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DziR
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 11
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2000-04-09 06:04 AM



Love is like a lump of gold,
    Hard to get And hard to hold.
Of all the guys I've ever met,
You are the one I can't forget.
I do believe that god above created you just for me to love.
He picked you out from all the rest,
Cause he knew I'd love you best.
When I die and go to heaven
And your not there,
I'll wait for you by the Golden Stairs.
If you're not there by Judgement Day,
I'll know you've gone the other way.
So I will trade in my golden wings,
And other precious things
And just to prove my love is true
I'll go to hell just to be with you!!!

( Thanks goes to DA GIRLZ!!! (Sylvia, Whitney, Kayla))

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
1 posted 2000-04-09 08:24 AM


Neat poem! Why don't you call it "I will stand by you....forever."

Anyway, I hope you find the right title sometime! It's a really good poem!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

      

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