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Jessica182 Junior Member
since 2000-03-20
Posts 15 |
NO one knows how you really make me feel you changed me in someway or another you made my candle burnout before I even got to blow them out before i saw the light the true light that lies in your soul the true hatred that no one knows a hate that someone has bestowed upon you and you must return the deed to someone else i know you cant help it but if you could im sure that you would know what you did was wrong and i never want anything to do with you as you want nothing to do with me why? I dont know BUT, that cycle stops here with me I never want to hurt anyone the way that you hurt me I wish you only knew Maybe you have experinced true pain but why would you want someone else to have it too And no, I don't hope your happy Cuz I don't want to lie, like you did I am not going to be someone that I am not What I am and what I feel is very real |
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poe_32 Member
since 2000-04-01
Posts 179Winnipeg, MB, Canada |
This was really well done, you put a lot of thought into your work. That shows that you really think very deeply into your writing. I enjoy reading your poetry, you write very simalar to what I would write. Keep on writing!!!!  Poe (Jess)  |
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Tara Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 76Minnesota |
I don't know if this was written about a personal experience but it was really good. i this did happen to you i'm sorry. i know it sucks being lied to. it's good to be honest and tell the person how you really feel, because usually that makes them feel bad about what they did to you. anyway good poem. Tara |
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