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poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
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Winnipeg, MB, Canada

0 posted 2000-04-05 01:21 AM



You are my lucky star
you are my happiness
without you I wouldn't be the same

What can I do
to show you my love for you
you are my guiding light
to true love

You've brought everything I need
happiness
pure love
and I thank you

You are everything to me
you are my world
and thats why I love you

Your kiss takes my breath away
the way you hold me makes me want to cry
the way you say I love you gives me shivers

You make me want to live another day
to feel the love you give
and the way you make love

You are un-like no other
and I've never loved someone as much as you
I want to be with you everyday

I want to share my life with you
I want you to be the one I will marry
the one I will grow old with

I want to love you forever
to wake up to in the morning
and the last to see before I sleep
and dream of your beautiful face

When I lie beside you at night
I know this is true love
and that I'll only love you
that's why I love you


© Copyright 2000 Jessica Bjarnason - All Rights Reserved
poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
1 posted 2000-04-06 07:59 PM


someone please reply!!!!!!!!!!!!!
natalie
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since 2000-04-02
Posts 56

2 posted 2000-04-07 05:41 PM


wow, I wish I had that feeling of true love, I hope you'll keep it. I like the poem,
natalie...

Marilyn
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2000-04-08 12:06 PM


Love is a precious thing. I am glad you have found it, just never take it for granted.  
Isabelle
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 176
Indiana
4 posted 2000-04-08 12:59 PM


Well written. I'm glad to see that you have found true love. I hope one day I will know that feeling. Keep up the good work.

Isa  

poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
5 posted 2000-04-09 04:54 AM


Thanks guys for your comments, I'm happy you liked the poem. But this is a poem I've written for my future husband whom I havent found yet, but I know is out there because I just have that feeling. I can't wait for it as well, but love requires patience. Thanks again, and people if you read my poems can you please reply because I love hearing from you all. Thanks again!!!!! Poe  
ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
6 posted 2000-04-09 09:31 AM


Hey Poe, I have replied to stax of your poems and I love reading them. You just have to wait a little cos my time zone is kinda different to yours so my replies would normally come at funny times for you! Be patient, my replies will reach your poems as soon I can get to them!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight."

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
7 posted 2000-04-09 09:34 AM


I also meant to say what a lovely poem this is. Sorry I take more time than you would like to reply your poems...

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


poe_32
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since 2000-04-01
Posts 179
Winnipeg, MB, Canada
8 posted 2000-04-10 12:37 PM


Again thank you Lizzie for reply so many times to all my poems, and all of you who take the time to read my poems, it means a lot to me. I hope to hear from you all soon.
Poe  

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