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Teen Poetry #2

I Wish You Didn't

foxy_16
Junior Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 31
Lake Lillian, MN, USA

0 posted 2000-04-04 01:45 AM

Make me happy
Make me sad
Make me worried
Make me mad

Drive me crazy
Pull my strings
Whisper all those
Little things

Make me perfect
Make me true
Make me sorry
Make me blue

Make me ignorant
Keep me warm
Make me melt
With all your charm

Get me pissed
Make me artistic
Touch me the way
That makes me go balistic

Make me pretty
Make me see
Make me irresponsible
Make me ME.

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-04 04:13 AM

Neat poem!! Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-04-04 01:36 PM

Nice work with this one. Nice rhyme and flow.

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