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Teen Poetry #2

Random Thoughts for A Not So Random Person.

DragonFang
Senior Member

since 2000-03-09

Posts 522
Missouri, USA

0 posted 2000-04-03 09:07 AM

The fire outside roars and flames to life.
And the fire inside is burning bright.
My heart, on fire, with love of thee,
Burning bright, burning hot,
For you my dear, my heart doth sing,
For you my dear, I'd do anything.

"Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.

jytree
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

1 posted 2000-04-03 09:54 AM

Short But Good

For when day turn to night I am still there
The fallen angel jytree

Comfrey83
Junior Member

since 2000-04-02

Posts 36
Winchester, Mass USA

2 posted 2000-04-03 11:26 AM

actaully jytree, i think often short poems are the greatest, saying so much with few things is hard what can i say?
great poem, thought you said alot with iit
Andy

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

3 posted 2000-04-03 01:39 PM

Short and sweet!! I agree with Comfrey, short poems are HARD! I am no good at them...wanna give me some tips? If you gots time, my email is janetmp@global.bw

Thanks!!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Ashiraladoni
Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 52
Duluth, MN, USA

4 posted 2000-04-03 11:09 PM

Thou art a good writer. Keep up the good work.

~Ashiraladoni

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