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Final Goodbye
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Final Goodbye |
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MelBear Junior Member
since 2000-03-26
Posts 29Imlay City, Mi |
GOODBYE I am gone from here. I left you I fear. I didn’t want to stay. This is all there is to say. I was in pain. What was there to gain? I am happy now. To say goodbye.. I ask how. I will see you again someday. And then we walk along heavens bay. Please forgive me for leaving. I want no grieving You must go on with life. I didn’t mean to cause you strife. To heaven I flew. On my way, to you a kiss I blew. Goodbye my friend. I’ll see you again in the end. I love you dear. Please don’t shed for me a tear. ~In loving Memory of Jessica Ettema and Jenni Rowland~ |
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KidS128111 Junior Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 13Northern California |
throughout this whole poem i feel the pain you must feel for losing a friend like you had. hope your doing good and i like this poem very much.keep posting. djkidspinz@cs.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I can feel how painful the death of your friends is for you. I am sure they are watching you from their place in heaven and taking care of you in a whole new way- as angels. This is a very nice poem to honour the memory of your late friends. Keep posting. |
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