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*Starry_Eyed* New Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 5 |
As I gaze into this mirror I see a face a face that I wish that I could replace I see short hair cut and layered a long neck wrapped with a pink necklace I see a slender body tall and tan long legs skinny and frail I look into my eyes like stars they seem at angles they look as though they gleem My freckles spead over my face not a sign of makeup not a single trace I gaze into this mirror as if there is no end I turn aways to go to bed I think of all there is to mend.... *Love is like quicksand, the longer you fall the harder it is to get out* |
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4eva_at_heart Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 238 |
i know how you feel. i always look in the mirror and find the faults that i want to change. But faults always go hand in hand with wonderful things. nobody is perfect...but nobody is a disappointment  Keep up the good writing Bec |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
A great poem. But you must realize that we all have our fualts. Our voice, our face, some of us have to have glasses becuase our eyes are not so good. Some must wear braces. People come in all shapes and sizes, who are we to determine what others should look like on the outside?? We are all beautiful on the inside. Well, if ya EVER need to talk, I'll be glad to listen. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind. |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Beauty is more than physical appearance. What you are inside is more important. I doubt there is much to "mend". Everyone finds faults with their appearance in one way or another. It's probably normal. Anyway, I liked your poem. Nice rhyme and it read well. You express yourself well also I think. |
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