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ezt
Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 19


0 posted 2000-03-17 07:48 AM



If I don´t have you
I´m a star withno light
a day with no night
if I don´t have you
I´ll quit my hobbys
both drawing and singing
just to be with you

© Copyright 2000 ezt - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-18 11:39 AM


Short, sweet, and to the point.
Must really care for this person.  Do they know???????

DragonFang
Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522
Missouri, USA
2 posted 2000-03-18 11:41 AM


Hmmm... Amazing what kind of emotion you can show with just seven little lines. Nice poem ezt.

 "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." I am lost in my own mind.


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