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Teen Poetry #2

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PEACEMAKER
Junior Member

since 2000-03-11

Posts 19
Sydney N.S.W Australia

0 posted 2000-03-13 07:20 AM

Here i stand all alone
with no one here to hear me moan
i woke today
to find i lost something close to me
but not to death or oversea
i have a thirst for knowledge
with ever breath i take
you showed me something we all should know
sometimes people try to hard
i know you left with course
so i now forgive u because? of all u showed
if only you had shown me this
right from the very start
we may have been together now
you near to hear me moan

Your gentle touch, your loving voice
where like the summer breeze
all now just memories
which fell so distant from me
seeing it from other eyes
i wouldn't' change a thing
standing here all alone
no one here to hear me moan

But looking through my hart at this
i'v seen i did you wrong
i know i never filled my half
so there always was that hole
ever word u said to me
ever song you sang
used to make my laugh and smile
now all that has gone
if you sung it differently
would make me look back on
all the things i'v said and done

I need you back right by my side
to sing me one last song
and show me that you have forgiven me
even if our loves not strong
still i stand all alone
no one near to hear me moan

__________

I know you love me o so much
thats why it can not be
for you were only second best
my true love is unseen
yes i have forgiven you for all the thing your done

Now the you have sang your song
i realise me true love
i see i'v done you wrong
i know i didn't fill hey half
so there was always a hole
no specal bonds or chains we tie
not our loves not strong
im happy your forgiven me
for all i'v said and done
now i stand hear all alone

Looking for my my unseen love
when it was so near
the one place i didn't look
because i fell such a fear

__________

So here we are together strong
nothing else to fear
all that left for us to do
learn each other more
from this our love will grow
and we'll part no more
still we stand all alone
but our love has made us one

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

1 posted 2000-03-13 02:06 PM

Nice (long)piece you have written here. Lots of feeling for sure. Funny how we all feel alone at times, thinking another is necessary to make us whole.
Nice job with this write.

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