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Piggy169 Junior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 10Belleville IL USA |
I am not very good and these but this is the only way i can put into words what i am thinking. please reply and let me know what you think What did i do to deserve this? Nothing, yet i still long for that one last kiss I didn't do anything wrong, yet i am the one in pain You broke up with me and broke my heart yet you are the one with the fame You said it had nothing to do with me it all on you Well how long is it going to take till you decide if your feelings are true. Should i wait around and let your heart decide or should i say forget it and run and hide Hid in a little hole where i will never be hurt again or continue to be in pain and belive that i am the one who sined I've had to have done something to be left with this broken heart if not why am i the one suffering my life falling apart why should i be the one that has to wait for you don't just think of yourself think of my emotions too! But untill the day that you decide you will be a part of me and i hope with time your ture emotions you see |
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Maitay Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 158Sisters,OR,USA |
*clap,clap,clap* This is a poem that so many of us should be able to share with people when they make us feel that low. Never was I able to so clearly explain how it felt to be treated that way. Wonderful job... ------------------ ~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~ ~Maitay Mirabel Litton~ |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Your words are ageless. Be you 14 or 54 these words still hold true. You should explore your talent for words more indepth. The feeling in this came across beautifully but with a little work the poem could evolve into a masterpiece. Give it some thought. Being able to write your thoughts and feelings will help you through your life. |
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