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chic
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since 2000-01-26
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yellville, Ar, U.S.

0 posted 2000-03-03 09:15 AM


You are my Father.
Why do you do this?
I am your daughter.
Is something amiss?

You touch me
not as a Father should
I want to tell someone
If only I could.

If I say NO
you will hate me.
If I say YES
you'll say you love me.

These things you do
I do not like
I cannot get away
I cannot fight

If I tell
I'll lose my family
If I don't
It will forever haunt me

You say you love me
yet I know better.
You have now placed on me
a scarlet letter.



 "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

© Copyright 2000 Barbara Mendoza - All Rights Reserved
faith
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since 2000-01-31
Posts 89

1 posted 2000-03-03 09:19 AM


Thats so sad...I mean is everything ok???*hug* ...The poem is amazin BUT ITS SO DARK AND HORRIFYIN!pls take care faith
chic
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since 2000-01-26
Posts 245
yellville, Ar, U.S.
2 posted 2000-03-03 09:32 AM


i can't really say if everything is ok, but thanx for caring

 "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

angel6917
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since 2000-01-14
Posts 478
WI
3 posted 2000-03-03 09:42 AM


Chic~
Oh, I'm so sorry.  Your poem was great, but the story it tells is terrifying.  Like I said, if you ever need to talk, e-mail me. I've got 2 eyes to read, and a shoulder to cry on- well, sorta, you know, I'm here for ya...
~Kristi Lynn

chic
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since 2000-01-26
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yellville, Ar, U.S.
4 posted 2000-03-03 09:54 AM


thanx kristi...i called you angel in the other by mistake...but anyway...i have things inside me that i haven't told anyone and i've been holding it in for 20 yrs...sooner or later...somethings going to give


 "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

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