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rich-pa
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since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana

0 posted 2000-02-20 01:41 AM


i walked to the store
-yesterday-
sun shining.
pretty girls smile.
i laugh them off.
neighborhood kid,
asks for a five...
i give it to him.
old people sit,
tell me hi.
i wave.
i reached the store,
it was closed.
how odd.
i turned around and went home.


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-LeAnn-
Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13
San Antonio,TX
1 posted 2000-02-20 01:45 AM


WOW…… ur such an intricate person!! I'm envious of u!!!  
hehe
ºmwuahºz tho
GREAT POEM or whatever it was……
LMAO
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<~>PEACE<~>

Salooma
Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781

2 posted 2000-02-20 09:50 AM


This is a real nice poem....and although simple, I think there's an explaination behind it all, right?? I love how it's so simple and brief.  

Salma

 "Not all the answers lie within your realm or mine, they lie within the borders."

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