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Poetic Dreams
Junior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 23
Lindsa, OKlahoma United States

0 posted 1999-10-23 07:12 AM

Everyone writes beautiful poems
I can't even write but one
I browse through the topics
Trying to see if I can top it
But as I read and see the talent
I think to myself: their so galent
My heart feels with love
Like wind under the wings of a dove
So free and open
With no worries of critisizim
Or worries of laughter
They don't understand what I am after
I am here to accomplish something
To set free
In peace
Like a dove

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~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~

Maitay
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 158
Sisters,OR,USA

1 posted 1999-10-23 06:30 PM

I like the way that you talk about how reading something makes you feel. it's nice to see a poem that doesn't follow along with all the others, it talks about a subject that is never broched by others, it's really a nice poem, keep up the good work..

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~The price of finding love is to eventually lose it. When I wish on a falling star, I wish not for material goods but to show kindness to others and be content with what the world may offer me~

~Maitay Mirabel Litton~

Poetic Dreams
Junior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 23
Lindsa, OKlahoma United States

2 posted 1999-10-25 02:55 AM

Thanx for replying I didn't know if anyone would reply. This poem states to truth.

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~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~

Star Fairy 2
Member

since 1999-09-06

Posts 260
cerritos, california, usa

3 posted 1999-10-25 06:34 PM

nice job
keep 'em comin =)

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Don't Fall.. Rise in Love
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ANON
Junior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 30
NZ

4 posted 1999-10-25 09:59 PM

wow, poetic dreams, this is a first, writng about rading others poems, which is a dam good idea!!
keep it up, i'll be reading more from u in the future

StratMatt
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

5 posted 1999-10-27 01:42 AM

Well written and a good topic to write about.
You certainly know how to sell your poetry to us. It looks like we're all buying. Keep up the good work

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"I went into the woods because I wished to live deliberately, to front the essential facts of life, and to see if I could not learn what it had to teach, and not, when I came to die, discover that I never lived." -Henry David Thoreau
"All comedians want to be rock stars, because they're cool. They always look like they're about to vomit." -Dana Carvey

Poetic Dreams
Junior Member

since 1999-10-23

Posts 23
Lindsa, OKlahoma United States

6 posted 1999-10-27 01:30 PM

Guys thanx so much for replying. I didn't think my poems should be posted her with all these good poems but you made it were I have confidince in myself. Thanx again.

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~Once it is said it can't be forgotten, but can always be forgiven~

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