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Tamma
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In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2000-02-15 09:08 PM


Forgotten on Valentine’s day,
Almost like nothing had changed.

The Years in the past were just the same,
The name “Tamma” was the last thought.

Somehow, for some reason I thought,
This year would be different.

A rose, or at least a call,
But not even that.

He left me at home,
Wondering where he went.

I am Tamma,
A person.

The one you “love”,
Tell me, am I right.

Or is that,
Just a lie as well?



 "Yes, I think 'toast' is an appropriate description."
-Jaya Ballard, Task Mage

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Dean
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 120
Canada
1 posted 2000-02-15 09:33 PM


Tight poem girl!! I like it very much!! There is alot of happy poems about Valentines day so I like how you wrote a sad one!!! Baby girl keep your head up!!

"I love all who are positive and who all are positive to me"


 "Live to love or why live at all"
Deano :)


Anglefire
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since 2000-02-12
Posts 7
somewhere real close
2 posted 2000-02-15 09:49 PM


truly i feel like that alot of times.  i want someone to aknowlege that i exist.
valentines day is the day that single people have the right to bitch!! hehe great poen hope to see more.
Etan

 -If your looking for the meaning of life look on the floor of my car-

Nikkisweet
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 183
Tx, Dallas
3 posted 2000-02-15 10:56 PM


My boyfriend did the same thing to me on Valentines Day.  Sorry to hear that.
Jer
Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443
USA
4 posted 2000-02-16 07:22 PM


Tell me about it! I for one don't care much for V-day either. It's just another day for gift stores and flower shops to get more money. Anyway, thats my opinion. Your all entitled to your own!

 "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler

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