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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
He left me alone Crying in the rain Feeling the heartache Knowing the pain He said he would always love me Our love would never fray Why did we break apart On Valentine's Day? A day to remember A day to love The sound of hearts soaring On wings of a dove Never to know What was to be Only I know He never loved me A time of roses A day to share I wonder Did he ever really care? Why did it happen On this day? A day of love Why must my heart pay? "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Oh! This is so sad. I'm really hoping this isn't actually something that happened, because I remember you telling everyone about getting engaged a while back. I hope this isn't true. The poem is great, but it's so sad! Salooma |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
sadly yes Salma..this poem is true...it happened yesterday...6 months of being together, 5 weeks after becoming engaged..sad huh? stay cool  I'll make it  ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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Smore Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 67el paso |
I'm so sorry, my boyfriend cheated on me 2 months after proposing to me. I can honestly say I know how you feel. After three months I still find myself missing his arms around me. I hope you won't dwell on this though otherwise the pain never lessens. Love isn't a miracle in life, the miracle of life is love. |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Lavada, Oh my goodness! I am sooooo sooooo sorry!!! When I started reading this, I was thinking oh i hope this isn't something that just happened! That is really awful. Sometimes I just don't understand guys. I hope that you are doing ok! If you ever want to talk, PLEASE email me. Singer1981@aol.com. I'm so sorry hun! ~Sarah |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
sadly, yes.,..this did happen...but I'm over him, and trying to find someone new..I know I have my whole life ahead of me, but I want to excplore the options. As for him, he already has another g/f...so I don't think he's hurting half as bad. Chin up girl! I'll make it! But I might e-mail you anyway  stay cool ~~Lavada~~ |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Lavada~ I loved your poem, no matter how sad it is. I realize you must be hurting now, but think happy thoughts, like you have all of us here for you if you need to talk. We all love you, chica! ~Kristi Lynn "Why does no one sees how hard I cry?" -Me |
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Singer1981 Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 148Fredonia, NY USA |
Lavada, Wow! I truly admire your strength. If and when I am engaged(although quite far in the future I'd imagine), I don't think I'd be over him or it nearly this quick. I'm glad that you're not letting it get you down, and I'm shocked to discover that he has moved on so quickly. Just remember...you don't need to find someone new so fast. Because who knows...the next person you may meet might be the one...and you wouldn't want to start that kind of a relationship while on the rebound. Good luck with everything!!~Sarah |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
More power to ya girl-friend! *Snaping his fingers* Hahaha.... sorry had to do that! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Seems to me that this new millinium has been hard on several relationships. I don't think I have ever had so many break ups happen around me all my life than I have this past week. I am glad you are able to go on with your life. It took me a few months to get over most of my break ups. I love the poem, how it was written and not why. SD If dying is the process of living life to its end. Then what is living? |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Hi all..I am very appreciative of your replies..it is great to know I have a big, huge family that cares stay cool all ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
*BUMP*  |
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sunshine17 Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 89Bonduel, WI USA |
I'm sorry to read about your pain. Aaron(my ex) and I broke up the Mon. before but on Valentine's Day he gave me a letter. I guess you can say that some guys are really dumb. I know how you feel even if it wasn't on the same day, my heart is still borken and my tears are still faling but all I can do is wonder did or does he even care. I'm sure you've heard that there are plenty of guys in the sea, and it's true although I haven't found any I'm sure they're out there somewhere. |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
That was a cool poem. Unfortunately it brought back some bad memories of Valentines Day. In fact, to be honest, I hate Valentines Day. I've never had anyone to celebrate it with. I've been dumped on twice on this day. Once my sophmore year at the Valentines Day dance and the second time this past Valentines Day. But, on behalf of all men, I apoligize to you and everyother woman who have been dumped on this dreadful day. People can just sometimes be so unthoughtful. Trevor P.S. If you ever want to talk or anything, look up my email address in my profile. If you want to walk with God, you've got to go His way! |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Sunni-- Thanks Trevor--You and all other guys are forgiven And I'm sorry to hear about your pain. :{stay cool ~~Lavada~~ "For every beauty, there is an eye somewhere to see it. For every truth, there is an ear somewhere to hear it For every love, there is a heart somewhere to receive it".--Ivan Panin |
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