Teen Poetry #2 |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
I think of you when I feel low it makes me smile just the thought of you comforts my tortured soul I think of you and the way you smile at me and it makes me think of better days. I look into your soul and I already know what I will find that of a pure heart that wish’s to love and give. Some times when I feel bad I wish I could hold you because only then could I escape reality. What does my soul need to keep from turning cold?? I guess just love. I do not speak of sex or material abjects that is not what I want. I just want to be loved.... "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Love you're poem. You responded to mine (Cupid's Arrow) and just to let you know...I'm a girl. I wrote it about my boyfriend because we have been going out for 2 months and a really like him. |
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poetic_butterfly Junior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 25illinois, usa |
well, since you replied to mine, i decided i'd reply to yours. very nice expression of love. i rarely write "true" love poems, and when i do they are so symbolically represented that it's hard to figure them out. but you managed to express the feeling very well. keep up the awesome writing. ....the words that stand still are often the ones that move us most.... |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Have an e-mail adress? My name is Nicole nicolec@family.net |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Are you going to answer me? |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Yes I have a email adress if you looked at my a acount it would tell but your new here so thats ok my email adress is dheidebrecht@dccnet.com "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
thanx for replying to my poems dean ur o.k. I loved this poem it was really good...here's my e-mail addy so u can drop me a line sometime...angel_n_despair@excite.com To be or not to be...that is the question. |
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Salooma Senior Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 781 |
Great poem dean....i think we all feel that way at times. Keep smilin' Salma |
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