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Anglefire New Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 7somewhere real close |
I never thought I would feel this way about someone. I fell for you the moment I saw you. I know I’m crazy. What else am I supposed to do to show you that you’re the one. I know you’re a free spirit, I don’t want to clip your wings. I want to help you fly, reach new heights, and sing. I have made my mistakes and you have made yours. I can’t explain it, I can’t deny it. We have both felt that spark, the passion and desire. I know I’m not the only one you seek. But what about that moment we shared, you felt it. We gazed in eachothers eyes fixed on that moment in time. I wanted it to last forever and I suspect you shared the same. Give me a chance, one is all I need. I’ll show you a world that your heart has never seen. A dream, a fantasy, they all would come true. Just give me one chance, I want to love only you. -Enyhr Etan- -If your looking for the meaning of life look on the floor of my car- |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
Your title seemed a little backward but your poem was well written.  Thanks for the read. Craig Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I really enjoyed your poem, especially the descriptions of "free spirit" and "that moment in time" when you looked into eachother's eyes. Maybe you should send this to the person it's about? Just a thought. |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
Great job and a well written one too. I aplaud you on your frist and most impressive post. I hope to see some other work in time. Welcome To Passions! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
You know, if you would've put your name in the right direction, and if you would've spelled the name of the poem the way my name is actually spelled and not backwards, I might have realized something. I'm sorry that you had to read my poem about you, Nate, really, I am. I come here to express myself, and not for any of the people around home. I do like this poem, it means a lot more to me than you might think it does, especially after our conversation. I care, yes, and I'm sorry I don't have the same feelings as you do for me. The last thing I wanted to do was hurt you, but somehow I managed to do it anyway. I'm sorry, Nate Rhyne.... ~Kristi Lynn |
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Anglefire New Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 7somewhere real close |
I never expected you to have the same feelings for me as i do you i hope that this will not hurt our relationship....but i fear it has? |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
this is soooo sweet "In a secret, I lIve, InvIsIble to all" -Me :) |
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Gadget28 Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33Miami, Florida United States |
This is so incredibaly sweet! Best Wishes! |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
No, Nate, this did not hurt our friendship, it just sort of woke me up to your feelings, and that I can't let you go on believing in something that wouldn't happen. I honestly didn't know at first, but, well, oh, I DON"T KNOW... Sorry to have hurt you, Nate. And don't worry, I don't plan on ending our friendship. ~Kristi Lynn            |
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Jer Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 443USA |
How sweet.... It sounds like the Passion Forums is becoming the LOVE CONNECTION! "WRITING IS EASY. ALL YOU DO IS STARE AT A BLANK SHEET OF PAPER UNTIL DROPS OF BLOOD FORM ON YOUR FOREHEAD." Gene Fowler |
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angel6917 Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 478WI |
Jer: Be nice- this Nate is just a friend, and It's been made VERY clear that that's it, no matter what. Ok? Ok, I thought so... Kristi Lynn |
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