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The Mike Sacks
Member

since 1999-08-29

Posts 129
brooklyn ny

0 posted 1999-10-21 07:04 PM

well i was in drug rehab for the past motnh

all i want is her
but you stand in my way
shes all i ever wanted
and u think all i want is play
shes all i ever dream of
every night and day
and every time we're together
u never let me stay
U know the way i am
thats y u care so much
wen i went to hug her
u wouldnt let me slip a touch
If i promise not to hurt her
will u let us be aloan?
becuase the way i feel about her
that feelings way to strong
They say ur out to kill me
but wat have i done wrong
all i did is love ur sister

Dear Tammi,
close your eyes,tell me wat do you see
do u see u and me
I see us walking together,hand in hand
in the city going about as we planed
if you only knew the way that i feel
can it be love,can it be real
My eyes will open and then they close
with you on my mind,but know1 knows
to me u r day,to me u r night
to me u r everything,everything right
to me u r my sunshine,even my rain
driving me crazy,but still keepin me sane
you are my love,you make me complete
every time i see u,my heart skips a beat
now i must sleep,to dream of you
and at the same time i hope u dream of me 2
I Love how your so sweet,
All I want is to Kiss you,
From your head down to your feet.
I even love how you eat
Even after they all say screw you.

But that’s only a glimpse of my fate,
‘Cause right now you don’t know me.
I’m just standing by love’s gate
Waiting for my soul mate.
And you don’t even see me.

When you steped into my life,
All my headaches went away.
But you cause eternal strife,
Even though I love you in my life
But I don’t know what to say.

_____________________--
I am sorry that I ever loved you
So sorry for giving you my heart

Sorry for having told you that I care

I promise I’ll never love you again, I won’t dare.

I regret having been so bold

For I never knew you could be so cold

Sorry again for having loved you with such passion

But I never knew you had no compassion

I would have never given you my heart

If I knew that you’d tear it apart

I am so sorry for having dared to dream

You were my destiny, or so it seemed

Now that I’ve seen the whole picture, you can bet

That I won’t forgive, nor will I forget.

_______________________________-
sound of your voice
the way it makes me feel
the thought of a tender kiss
closing with a seal
Every single night i dream of you
every day in class the same
but then again i truthfully i doubt
u even know my name
to u i am a stranger
someone u even knew
to me you are a beauty
someone my heart consumed
I just wish 1 day I'd have a chance
i know i never will
to take your hand hold it tight
and swallow all those pills
as i sit here and i cry
knowing i have no chance
just 1 date with you
to take you to a dance
i know i dot like dancing
i know you lug i too
but truthfully I'll do anything 4 u

sound of your voice
the way it makes me feel
the thought of a tender kiss
closing with a seal
Every single night i dream of you
every day in class the same
but then again i truthfully i doubt
u even know my name
to u i am a stranger
someone u even knew
to me you are a beauty
someone my heart consumed
I just wish 1 day I'd have a chance
i know i never will
to take your hand hold it tight
and swallow all those pills
as i sit here and i cry
knowing i have no chance
just 1 date with you
to take you to a dance
i know i dot like dancing
i know you lug i too
but truthfully I'll do anything 4 u

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

1 posted 1999-10-21 10:08 PM

truthfully, this poem dragged on, was quite lenghty, and had some words misspelled to the point I didn't know quite what you were syaing..but it does have some merits, especially in the second verse. If I were you, I would look it over, discard what isn't necessary, fix the spelling, and maybe repost.

BTW, I hope drug therapy worked for you and that you are now clean.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

starboards
Member

since 1999-10-14

Posts 467
longwood, florida

2 posted 1999-10-21 10:53 PM

I love the poem about being sorry for ever loving...i too am sorry for ever loving...but we dont have a choice in the matter do we?? keep it up!

starboards

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"

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