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The Night! |
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faith Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 89 |
The moon calmly glancing at me all through that lonely night, The heat , the ppain and all that is within me flying unbounded, A hopeless plight through those dark heavenly secrets of the sinful night, Hidden sirens of the skies above an only be heard by betrayed lovers, The wind not breathing like it used to , a butchered destiny, And the leaves ,so quite , softky rustling against each other , Like secret lovers making love through out the night, Wary and scared , till the seeds are spilled, Like blood mixed with tears of that murdered soul, So many dreams drowning in that deep river of hate and sorrow, Stillness gently embraces me , yet another clue of the sinful night, A promise ...that even through this sheer helplesness , this overwhelming sadness , we will always be together Me and my dead night , Where when all is gone , It will miserbaly await to engulf me in its hole violence! hope it makes sense!  sf |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
faith: very visual word-choice and very intriguing piece.. i like it a lot sincerely, jerome the boy who's inordinately happy today A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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