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Look Into Her Eyes, Look Into Beauty
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Look Into Her Eyes, Look Into Beauty |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
In Your Eyes I asked you the question Then we sat and talked Your words were hallow And eyes filled with thought In your eyes I found Words Words trapped by the tounge In your eyes you warned me Teased me with feelings, i see In your eyes fear Lost in world of maddness With emotions standing still Dreams speek to me Your eyes still shine I'm defended by silence Defeated by time The end i know not Waiting to see what time buys But for now, i'm lost in your eyes ---Written by:Hoppy 10-26-99 "If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. http://members.xoom.com/weeklyhoppy Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. THE PAGE OF PURE POETIC EXPRESSION!! |
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The Haunted Poet Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 37Sumner Washington |
Great poem you've got here! I like the meaning behind it. Keep up the good work! |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
I think your poem was very expressive and discerning. You are really talented. |
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poetry_kills Senior Member
since 1999-12-04
Posts 549new orleans |
hoppy: this really is very good... i'm impressed... this is my favorite of yours that i've read so far... pray, who is the object of this poem? sincerely, jerome the boy with no brain A savage place! as holy and enchanted As e'er beneath a waning moon was haunted By woman wailing for her demon-lover! ~Coleridge |
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hoppy Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 271 |
thank you, this is more of the type of poetry that i normally write. I just felt like arguing with the others  but the object of the poem....that i can't tell ya. Use your vast imagination to come up with someone. not important that you know who i wrote it for, is important who you think about when you read this poem"If there is anything the nonconformist hates worse than a conformist it's another nonconformist who doesn't conform to the prevailing standards of nonconformity." SUBMIT YOUR POETRY HERE, AWSOME PAGE. http://members.xoom.com/weeklyhoppy Don't look... you might see. Don't listen... you might hear. Don't think... you might learn. Don't walk... you might stumble. Don't run... you might fall. Don't make a decision... you might be wrong. Don't live...you might die. THE PAGE OF PURE POETIC EXPRESSION!! |
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